A writing walk along the towpath

On Monday 1st May, it felt like there were many occasions to mark at once. Summer was actually in the air, and on time for once this spring. It also marked the tenth anniversary of launching my freelance writing business. I’ve learned a lot over the years, and have met many remarkable people. I also felt ready for a challenge, and to connect with nature and my own creativity. So I caught the tram and tram train to Rotherham Parkgate shopping centre and walked back home along the canal.

I will be leading a similar but much shorter walk on Sunday 14th May, and hopefully this post will give you a taste for walking creatively! https://www.thewritersworkshop.co.uk/events/canal-walk-and-nature-writing-workshop-wanne

The walk I’m leading for the Writers Workshop will take around two hours at a leisurely pace with time for writing en route and sticks to the towpath, which is entirely traffic free. In contrast, Monday’s walk was an epic adventure including a detour around New York football stadium (the home of Rotherham United before you think I really got lost.)

Starting as I waited for the tram, I wrote notes that turned into poems on my phone, using Google docs. I also took lots of photos. Sometimes I sat down at a particular location and took notice of the things that were happening around me. Sometimes I wanted to tell the story of where I was, and some poems just happened spontaneously as things happened. It’s interesting that when I write poems as they are happening, often something will come along at the right time to resolve the poem.

As a word of caution, if you are planning on doing this on a long walk – my walk was around twelve miles – I would recommend bringing a mobile powerpack with you, as my phone was almost out of battery by the time I arrived home.

Here’s more information about the canal: https://canalrivertrust.org.uk/enjoy-the-waterways/canal-and-river-network/sheffield-and-tinsley-canal

Anticipation

Waiting for a tram on the first of May –

birdsong and distant traffic.

Quiet enough to hear footsteps.

Sunshine on dandelions,

hanging branches reaching twigs down

to brush the cow parsley,

some kind of plane tree I haven’t noticed before,

Unfurling leaves, dry but velvety,

Like the back of a baby mouse.

Tram Ride

The tram slides through familiar ground,

Aldi and Wynsors world of shoes.

A man shouts at his friend as he gets on,

almost holds up the tram. Heart racing.

Friendly conductor. Β£2 all the way to Parkgate.

Bargain! Hope I make the connection at the cathedral.

Horse chestnut tree lighting its blossom candles,

huge green hands grown overnight.

Some trees still almost bare,

but catching up.

Glossop road deserted,

Remembering student days,

Spilling out of Bar One and onto West Street,

Dodging the hen night parties,

Until one night, we became one of them.

Cathedral Square

Goldfinches call in Cathedral Square.

The man who’s mate shouted earlier

is shouting about a borrowed fiver

The city’s homeless, operating in their own world.

A pug sniffs the foot of a low wall

and grins at me when he’s dragged away.

Living his best life, joyously waddling.

Ghostly organ music drifts in the air.

Tram Train

The tram train is quiet.

The recorded voice message somehow subdued,

The doors beep and close

as the cathedral chimes half ten,

and we’re off, slowly, tentatively feeling our way along the tracks to castle square.

Boarded up old Primark shop,

Torn posters and graffiti.

Bright paint of Castle Gate bridge,

leading nowhere.

Empty grand buildings from Victorian to ultra modern.

Once over the bridge, the tram train unleashes its power,

restraining itself at Hyde Park,

An athlete, warming up. 

Now it’s flying, having fun.

The voice gets more jaunty and warns us to hold tight,

as if we’re at a fun fair.

Brakes scrape and no one gets on at the next stop.

Leans around the corner like a biker hugging the road

Catching the sharp bend jerkily like a ghost train,

heading to the ghost town of Attercliffe.

90s technology park looking dated,

new houses cluster around here now,

with a village cosiness but all mod cons,

a drive to charge your electric car.

Arena and stadium now

Olympic legacy park on the site of Don Valley Stadium

Where I watched U2 and the Chilli Peppers.

Centertainment car park empty,

Wincobank hill in the distance,

Houses ribboned with woodland,

Huge blue mass of IKEA.

Meadowhall’s green glass domes,

a signpost to Timbuktu.

Cyclists passing.

Car parks look empty.

The river surface is glassy.

Scrapes and judders as we change direction, then stop

under the huge weight of the double decker motorway bridge

No one seems concerned.

And now we drift along, silently,

Onto the rails.

The tram train runs like it’s greased with butter.

Past woods and stacks of containers,

Magna science centre in the old steelworks,

Bobbing up and down gently, speeding past mills, 

Steel recyclers and the New York stadium.

This is Rotherham.

Spire of the minster dark against the white clouds

Next stop Parkgate.

Accelerating to warp speed

past silos and corrugated iron,

CCTV towers, piles of gravel

saw tooth roofed factories,

Still, rippling water.

The other side of Parkgate

On the other side of the railway tracks,

chiffchaffs call.

The path is soft earth and grass.

As the tram train returns without me.

A sharp, fresh smell blows on the breeze.

Traffic recedes to a gentle hush.

Water reflecting blue boat paint

Dimpling gently in the wind.

Something stirs to nibble a slice of bread,

floating among cut grass and apple blossom petals at the end of the dock,

Nudging the bread as it takes a bite.

Woodland clearing

Smell of fast food fries fills the air

then disappears, replaced by the delicate floral scent of cow parsley.

Woodland clearing scattered with jigsaw pieces and burned springs.

Wren repeats its sweet call next to the flyover.

A dismembered purple tennis ball,

bridal arches of bramble and wild rose,

birds safe to sing in their sanctuary –

song thrush’s creative stream of impressions

and blackbird’s sweet melancholy melody.

Smaller songbirds contributing their twittering trills,

with the soft hush of the breeze in new leaves.

Abandoned

Abandoned boatyard,

gently rusting, rotting hills,

DIY projects given up on.

Gates twined with nettles,

eerie yet peaceful.

Factory

Martins swoop, wheel and chatter

in the stately wake of an approaching duck.

Then the air hums and smells like hot rubber

Busy factory whirs constantly echoing against buildings,

building up a constant ringing him, sighing hiss, rumble and fizz.

Forbidden

Thwarted in Rotherham.

Take a diversion, past the glass factory

and through a flickering underpass.

Getting caught up in the football crowd,

optimistic in red and white.

The canal path is blocked,

An elaborate diversion is suggested

on a sign blocking the path.

It feels like summer now,

industrial and urban.

I improvise, following directions

of my own invention,

that get me back on the towpath,

through level crossings and spooky 

litter-strewn lanes,

a path scarred with remains of fires.

Back onto a forbidden but well used

stretch of towpath.

The great outdoors

It’s the great outdoors!

No more barriers –

just silver birches

unfurling bracken.

The urban is receding again now,

the canal, a different world.

Past a smallholding with a small flock of goats

cropping the glass contentedly.

The smallest kids bleats insistently 

as a collie passes by, pretending it’s not a wolf.

None of the other goats pay it any attention .

Tinsley Viaduct

Constant roar of traffic,

people and things going places.

North to South, South to North,

Gripping the steering wheel and concentrating.

Below, seedheads float aimlessly,

Families cycle, spot fish in the water.

Birds sing louder to drown out the motors.

Tinsley Marina

The top of a flight of locks,

domesticity of moored boats

With rotary washing lines.

A fisherman has set his shelter up for the day,

casting his line into dark green water.

Seraphic Academy

On a deserted, industrial street,

There’s a familiar shape of a Victorian

Sheffield school.

It’s a school again now,

Doors open, despite it being a bank holiday.

Are the children training to be angels?

Attercliffe canal moorings

Attercliffe canal moorings,

no boats are moored,

just some people fishing,

set up well for the day.

Water drifts, fish plop,

distant roar of traffic,

and the low hum of electricity,

pylons overhead.

Even a siren doesn’t drown out the birds.

Suddenly a shout for a net.

A fisherman struggles with something

large and thrashing in the water weed.

A pike, two feet long

They lay it out, take photos

Before lowering it into the water again

Trapped in a keep net,

They say they will let him go.

It won’t be fooled again.

Worksop Road aqueductΒ 

Who would know it was here from the road,

intersecting with the railway bridge?

If you weren’t paying attention from the canal

you would forget there is just air underneath. 

Attercliffe Footbridge 6a

How long has it been

since anyone last crossed

Attercliffe footbridge 6a?

Heading straight into a foundry,

through a steel shuttered doorway.

Rusty paint and perforated steel,

A daily commute now forgotten.

Magnet Fishing

Magnet fishing by Cadmon bridge –

they’ve found a cheese knife,

ready to use. It looks unfinished,

a little rough around the edges,

maybe a discarded imperfection.

It’s been in the water a long time 

Walking home

I’ve reached the canal’s end

on the home stretch now,

legs aching, they still bend,

carrying me the final steps I need to go.

On this day, summer arrived,

A day to do us proud.

I’m glad I strived, and have nearly arrived.

Time outside, feet on the ground. 

A chance to reconnect,

I took time to stretch.

A day I will look back and recollect

the dandelions and vetch.

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